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La maleta mágica

Autora: G.R.T
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Fecha de publicación: 19/06/2009
Leído: 3146 veces
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 Esté cuento está inspirado en mis amigas. Os pido que respetéis mi obra aunque eso no significa que no podéis dejar comentarios, es más, vuestra opinión me ayudaría a mejorar mi forma de escribir ¡Disfrute! (Nada de lo escrito en este cuento es real)



   Hola me llamo Sara y vivo en un pueblecito llamado Fuenlabrada. ¡Es un pueblo muy bonito! Os quiero contar algo que me ocurrió hace muchos años cuando tan solo tenía 15 años.
  Un día de un caluroso verano me fui a comprar una maleta para las vacaciones. Fui de tienda en tienda pero no había ninguna maleta que me gustara, pero después de andar durante toda la tarde se me ocurrió pasarme por un callejon en el que había una tienda de maletas en la que hacía ya bastante tiempo había trabajado su abuela. Al pasar por su escaparate, me llamó la atencion una maleta de colores, con muchas estrellas y purpurina. Aunque la maleta era la más pequella del escaparate tembién era la más llamativa Al final decidí comprarme esa pero... cuando llegue a casa me di cuenta de que aquella maleta era demasiado pequeña como para meter todas mis cosas, pero de repente cuando metí mi libro preferido... ¡Este encogió! A sí estube provando con todas las cosas que me quería llevar y ¡Hasta me sobro sitió! Así fue como esas empece a viajar de lugar en lugar sin necesitar más que esa diminuta maleta... ¡O! ¡Que tarde es! Me tengo que ir por que mañana me voy a Paris y voy a meter todas mis cosas en mi maleta mágica.

Autora:G,R,T


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